Feedback for my track

[Camiel]

Hi Medway!

Here is a link to one of my new tracks, will you be able to give some feedback on it?

Im thinking of sending two tracks (including this one)off to you for mastering. What do you think of the music would you be able to get this to sound a lot better if you master this track? I will then of course send the dry unmastered version.

Thanks for your time, here is the link:

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Grtz,
Camiel.

[Scottie Lanford]

I made a short clip of my first real track im working on and nobodys heard it yet except me.Its not finnished this is just the start of the track theres still allot i want to do with it.In the 3 year ive been practicing to make music this is the best ive done so far,what do you think?

Oh and the genre is hardstyle

This is a trusted download site and its fast too so plz download and tell me what you think.Thanks a bunch