Two trance tracks need feedback

[Iven Kriss]

Hi,
Am new to your forum and found it really interesting. I thought I could get an expert's advice on two of my tracks...Here they are,
1. Who We Are_Iven Kriss (Genre: Trance )
http://soundcloud.com/iven-kriss/who-we-are-iven-kriss

2. Avatar_Iven Kriss (Genre: Trance)
http://soundcloud.com/iven-kriss/avatar-...riss-remix

I'd be happy to hear your comments and thanks in advance for your attention and time...

[admin]

Iven,

Hi had a listen.. Soundcloud I believe is still 128k on playback so cant always judge mix from their streaming. Musically I think everything is fine though.

I did hear what is maybe too much of a stereo effect on the first track which could cause phase problems (although this would need to be checked out on a meter or mono switch).